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Talking about Deviant Art again by Jhrono on 04-20-2005 at 11:22 PM
First of all, i'm back, i couldnt live without this forum for 5 days...
I'm here to ask ur opinion about my latest deviation :
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/17447872/
All comments here or at deviant art are welcome..thank you all
RE: Talking about Deviant Art again by .Roy on 04-21-2005 at 09:29 AM
quote:
Originally posted by johny
First of all, i'm back, i couldnt live without this forum for 5 days...
I'm here to ask ur opinion about my latest deviation :
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/17447872/
All comments here or at deviant art are welcome..thank you all
Its ok. It would look better though without the text.
I love that sun thing at the top right.
RE: Talking about Deviant Art again by Stonne Menackis on 04-21-2005 at 10:25 AM
ehr... find it a tad bit too abstract... i've no clue of what it's supposed to be 
doesn't make me feel anything. without the text, could be something some company would use as logo...
the text is also a bit too... fast. i would've put more space between the lines. the most important two, about "you are missing me", directly follow up... just imagine it being said in a movie, dude, there'd at least be ten seconds between the two sentences... you don't even have a . to end the first one at least do that, but it'd be better if you'd put more space between the two. hit enter at least three times.
also, i find the entire composition just too energetic for such a... well, kinda serious statement. when spoken (/written) the right way, it's quite dramatic, even. the pic has just got too much speed for such a time-taking statement...
i'm not hating it though...