thanks i saw all the mistakes now that you pointed out where they were, thank you i should be able to avoid making those again.
PS. by the way the only mistake that was actually mine was the mistake of saving in ASCII the 2 coding mistakes are actually from the code as writting in the scripting documentation found on the scripts page of this site so they may need correcting when somebody gets a chance, i have reported this to the mpscripts.net website forum under the suggestions section which can be reached by clicking the link below.
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