Shoutbox

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Originally posted by Menthix
Lolz (from same user): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cp06JCJEIC4

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What the FUCK was he doing with the pumpkin :/. Using it as a buttplug?

In all honesty, you should be at least showing us the video that was submitted, not another version. We can't sit here imagining what the submitted one looks like.

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Originally posted by Steven
well constructive criticism aside, what about it just as a first video that was not for school purposes, just for fun. how was it then?

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..you're kidding...

Yeah, im kidding.......................

but lets pretend im not

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Originally posted by Steven
Even Cleaner  like took out rubbing and stuff

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Originally posted by Menthix
Lolz (from same user): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cp06JCJEIC4

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First though.. WTF .. but funny none the less

This is just disturbing!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7XIvxyDZAxc&feature=channel_page

Lol yeah that one fursure isnt going to see the light of day in the class rooms as far as i know

He asked for feedback on video, not content or music, although personally, I didn't like the music nethier.

As for video, err, yeah 60% seems fair. Basic editing and camera techiques... nothing particulary special but I hope the appeal goes ok for you. Maybe next time, throw in things at the end, such as a storyboard that was designed or something. Because its end of the video doesnt mean its end of your project.