Shoutbox

one tip: it is extremely hard to get a professional feel to you're writing... Tasha's thoughts are basically mine as well as they derived from a conversation we had about this story... the best peice of advice i can give you is think about the story more... it feels very, amateurish to me, put this story away, pick it up in a month and read it with a clean mind then see what you think of it. The majority of the time you'll want to change loads... That's what i always do and it improves the style of writing as well...