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Originally posted by .Vimto.
It doesnt but my poem doesnt even make much sense, so it would be a plus if it did rhyme but it dont 
And its really depressing. I quite like depressing poems but mine is a bit on the suicidle side. I like to make statements.
Like ddunk implied, it doesn't have to rhyme.
Well, it could be a plus, but it really doesn't have to rhyme.
I consider poetry as an art.
You say you like to make statements. I say great, because one of the main points in arts is about expressing yourself.
The best person who can judge how good/bad your arts are is only you
Edit: I think there are some members on the forums who can help you (i.e. give some feedback about your poems). One of them is
alby.
In addition, i always admire
Time's choice of words when he's posting a post.
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