Shoutbox

It's okay, I hate how it just repeats over and over though, and there's no sense of feeling to it, they're all just quiet. There needs to be bits where it's really powerful to make them good songs, needs to sing a bit louder/harder in certain places etc. Just small things that make up a good composition tbh.

IMO a good song needs to change, evolve, or die down in different bits. Alos, the more instruments the better, Piano and a few synth sounds get a bit boring, again, especially when it's just repeated.

That's all the kind of things I think about when I'm doing my Music coursework/general compositions.

Criticism aside, pretty good for a first try, just not, zomg you're amazing. ;p