RE: fresh out the box...
Nice work. [not really my type of music either, but musically it's pretty good, although, one thing I didn't like was the bit around 2:30, before the drums comes in the melody gets really loud as if it's about to come in and the dies off again, I think if you're going to build it up like that it should have gone in then, seems better rhythmically imo. I imagine you made it die away again cause you didn't want it to be too obvious or something, but I think it'd work better =p]
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