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RE: A story I wrote
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its a good story for your age (no offence), just a tad predictable. But, you start to think of things to write in plot lines that no-one wouldve thought about when you get to 15/16 yrs i find; upto then i found i was quite restriced in my ideas. For example, my friend writes at an amazing standard now; he writes novels that are actually readable and of things you would never of dreamed of; but he used to be just as restricted mentally as i was. Its still a cool story 
See, not trying to start an arguement here, but that's sort of stupid... I mean, it all depends on what type of person you are, and who your audience is. What to you is predictable is probably not to others. What to you is an amazing novel of things you couldn't dream of, could be a completely boring and predictable story to someone else. And age is a slight factor, but not that big of one, all depends on your intellect. You could have a 10 year old who writes a better story than a 16 year old. In writing there are no restrictions as to when you suddenly are much better, or when you aren't mentally restricted. And it still depends on audience and what type of person you are at writing.
I think it is a good story, despite it having a few mistakes.  It isn't really my type of story, yet it is still good. 
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RE: A story I wrote
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Originally posted by Tasha
See, not trying to start an arguement here, but that's sort of stupid... I mean, it all depends on what type of person you are, and who your audience is. What to you is predictable is probably not to others. What to you is an amazing novel of things you couldn't dream of, could be a completely boring and predictable story to someone else. And age is a slight factor, but not that big of one, all depends on your intellect. You could have a 10 year old who writes a better story than a 16 year old. In writing there are no restrictions as to when you suddenly are much better, or when you aren't mentally restricted. And it still depends on audience and what type of person you are at writing.
I think it is a good story, despite it having a few mistakes. (Smilie) It isn't really my type of story, yet it is still good. (Smilie)
Exactly. *All posts are a purely speculative hypothesis based on abstract reasoning.
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Originally posted by Tasha
I think it is a good story,
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despite it having a few mistakes.
I tried getting rid as many as possible. My teacher who is marking it will spot out the mistakes I missed
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It isn't really my type of story, yet it is still good.
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Wow That's pretty good. and your Cover page is awesome. Keep it up!
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Good work
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Wow That's pretty good.
thanks  quote:
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and your Cover page is awesome.
I was amazed too
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Keep it up!
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RE: A story I wrote
How can a planet be inhabited by robots? They can't evolve or reproduce
Good story though. |
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How can a planet be inhabited by robots? They can't evolve or reproduce
 Its mister non-imagination ...j/k
I dunno 
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Good story though.
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(Smilie) Its mister non-imagination (Smilie)...j/k
I dunno (Smilie)
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