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In the time you spent onhere you could have rewritten your assignment.

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Originally posted by .Vimto.
It doesnt but my poem doesnt even make much sense,

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Alot of poems don't make sense either. (well not till you look deeper anyway)

You could try posting your poem to get feedback on it. (but don't ask for someone to write it for you)

Or do waht sunshine said, get off your ass and write a new one

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Originally posted by .Vimto.
It doesnt but my poem doesnt even make much sense, so it would be a plus if it did rhyme but it dont And its really depressing. I quite like depressing poems but mine is a bit on the suicidle side. I like to make statements.

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Like ddunk implied, it doesn't have to rhyme.
Well, it could be a plus, but it really doesn't have to rhyme.

I consider poetry as an art.
You say you like to make statements. I say great, because one of the main points in arts is about expressing yourself.
The best person who can judge how good/bad your arts are is only you

Edit: I think there are some members on the forums who can help you (i.e. give some feedback about your poems). One of them is alby.
In addition, i always admire Time's choice of words when he's posting a post.

eat some sandpaper

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Originally posted by .Vimto.
how to make my throat really really really REALLY bad

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scream like an idiot!! i made that when i didnt want to go to school. it works. turn up good hate-rock um i mean heavy metal and scream the lyrics!! it helps. WARNING: you will lose your voice for 2-3 days... depends on your screams

Eat broken glass.

But seriously, you don't want to damage your throat for one day of free school... just redo the assignment in time, fake it, make up another excuse... or just take the consequences for not doing your stuff.

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Originally posted by MenthiX
Eat broken glass

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yummi. with a bit ketchup. it tastes really good

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Originally posted by MenthiX
you don't want to damage your throat for one day of free school

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thats right too.

but why dont you wanna go to school?

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Originally posted by ins4ne
but why dont you wanna go to school?

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http://shoutbox.menthix.net/showthread.php?tid=68...d=750118#pid750118

oh sorry my fault

just write somestuff down and say he/she just don't gets it... and refuse to explain it.. say it is too painfull or something....