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O.P. Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed!
Hello

We are writing some lyrics in English and we are doubting..

Why Did You
Left Me Here
Alone
Why Didn’t You
Listen To Me

Can we use this or does it have to be "Have" and "Haven't"?

It's kind of a problem because it's already on Promo release. You can listen to the song here and read the complete lyrics: http://www.myspace.com/marlisamusic

Hoping for a fast answer.
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This post was edited on 08-16-2007 at 12:37 PM by Exca.
But that is my opinion!

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RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed!
The "didn't" part is fine, although "why did you left me here" should be "why did you leave me here"...
08-16-2007 12:38 PM
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RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed!
I really like the song that plays when I visit that myspace site :O

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RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed!
quote:
I Called Him Seven Days A Week (Days A Week)
But I Didn’t Had The Time To Speak (Time To Speak)
Should be
quote:
I Called Him Seven Days A Week (Days A Week)
But I Didn’t have The Time To Speak (Time To Speak)
.

quote:
All I Wanted Was His Love Just For Me
All I Wanted Was A Little Piece Of My Dreams
All I Wanted Was One Last Kiss
But The Words He Said To Me Where These
should be
quote:
All I Wanted Was His Love Just For Me
All I Wanted Was A Little Piece Of My Dreams
All I Wanted Was One Last Kiss
But The Words He Said To Me Were These

and finally,
quote:
Yeah,
I Want You To Know
I’m Fine Now
You Don’t Even Matter Too Me Anymore
should be
quote:
Yeah,
I Want You To Know
I’m Fine Now
You Don’t Even Matter To Me Anymore

The song is awesome by the way! I like it ;)

oh, I missed one:
quote:
BRIDGE

Why Did You
Left Me
Alone
Why Didn’t You
Listen To Me
Just Keep Sayin’
Go Away
I Wanne Give My Life A Chance To Grow
But He Doesn’t Understand The Words
I Love You
Go Away
I Wanne Give My Life A Chance To Grow
But He Doesn’t Understand The Words
I Love You
should probably be
quote:
BRIDGE

Why Did You
Left Me
Alone
Why Didn’t You
Listen To Me
Just Keep Sayin’
Go Away
I Wanne Give My Life A Chance To Grow
But He Doesn’t Understand The Words
I Love You
Go Away
I Wanna Give My Life A Chance To Grow
But He Doesn’t Understand The Words
I Love You

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O.P. RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed!
Tnx for helping us out!

The song indeed has a big 'scoring' potention, all credits to Enblanc and Marlies! :-). It's a refreshing style
Should be released soon.
But that is my opinion!

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RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed!
one last thing
quote:
I’m The One Who Fighted Day After Day (Day After Day)
should be "fought"

Great song, btw.
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RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed!
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Originally posted by Exca

The song indeed has a big 'scoring' potention[...]

I think you mean potential. ;)
I also think you're right, it's a pretty darn good song.

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O.P. RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed!
The song is updated with the new vocals. This took some time as the studio is not like a supermarket you just walk in to and do your thing ;). We combined this with 2 new songs. One is ready and the other one is to be continued in the third studio-session which comes soon hopefully.

Check it out on www.myspace.com/marlisamusic

Thanks again for your help :)
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Is it still the go away original one? Also, can you provide a downloadable one? I'd love to have this on my MP3 ;)
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RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed!
Great song. Pity you disabled the download link! :(
Good luck! :grin:
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