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A story I wrote by prashker on 01-16-2006 at 05:17 AM

Enjoy...I have not alot to say...I am really tired. its midnight. Just finished story and cover.

view it here http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/27751336/

enjoy

and good night

RE: A story I wrote by J.J on 01-16-2006 at 05:28 AM

You've got a good imagination thats for sure :tongue:

Well written

RE: A story I wrote by Hank on 01-16-2006 at 05:55 AM

well written story dude,,

RE: A story I wrote by Pinchichuv on 01-16-2006 at 07:09 AM

nice story Sam, writte more (Y)

RE: A story I wrote by user27089 on 01-16-2006 at 07:51 AM

Really nice story, I like it .

RE: A story I wrote by prashker on 01-16-2006 at 12:44 PM

:cheesy: finally I have written a good story people actually like ...

lets hope my teacher thinks the same way when she marks it

RE: A story I wrote by Voldemort on 01-16-2006 at 09:46 PM

its good.......
my eyessss
they hurrrrrrrrrrrttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
been in the pc about an hourrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
theyyyyyyyyyyyyyy hurttttttttttt
arghhh i want to arrrrrrr

RE: A story I wrote by prashker on 01-16-2006 at 09:55 PM

quote:
Originally posted by damm-o

its good...

thanks

I showed my teacher it. so far she likes it

and the cover.

quote:
Originally posted by damm-o

been in the pc about an hourrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

get out then

RE: RE: A story I wrote by Supersonicdarky on 01-16-2006 at 10:00 PM

quote:
Originally posted by jchichuv
nice story Sam, writte more

so i can steal it

[Image: excellent.jpg]

RE: A story I wrote by stoshrocket on 01-16-2006 at 10:06 PM

its a good story for your age (no offence), just a tad predictable. But, you start to think of things to write in plot lines that no-one wouldve thought about when you get to 15/16 yrs i find; upto then i found i was quite restriced in my ideas. For example, my friend writes at an amazing standard now; he writes novels that are actually readable and of things you would never of dreamed of; but he used to be just as restricted mentally as i was. Its still a cool story (y)

RE: A story I wrote by prashker on 01-16-2006 at 10:17 PM

quote:
Originally posted by Supersonicdarky

quote:
Originally posted by jchichuv
nice story Sam, writte more

so i can steal it

quote:
Originally posted by Methos2
its a good story for your age (no offence)

thanks....and none taken

quote:
Originally posted by Methos2
just a tad predictable.

yes I know

quote:
Originally posted by Methos2
But, you start to think of things to write in plot lines that no-one wouldve thought about when you get to 15/16 yrs i find

quote:
Originally posted by Methos2
upto then i found i was quite restriced in my ideas. For example, my friend writes at an amazing standard now; he writes novels that are actually readable and of things you would never of dreamed of; but he used to be just as restricted mentally as i was.

yes I understand

quote:
Originally posted by Methos2
Its still a cool story

thanks

RE: A story I wrote by Tasha on 01-16-2006 at 10:20 PM

quote:
Originally posted by Methos2
its a good story for your age (no offence), just a tad predictable. But, you start to think of things to write in plot lines that no-one wouldve thought about when you get to 15/16 yrs i find; upto then i found i was quite restriced in my ideas. For example, my friend writes at an amazing standard now; he writes novels that are actually readable and of things you would never of dreamed of; but he used to be just as restricted mentally as i was. Its still a cool story

See, not trying to start an arguement here, but that's sort of stupid... I mean, it all depends on what type of person you are, and who your audience is. What to you is predictable is probably not to others. What to you is an amazing novel of things you couldn't dream of, could be a completely boring and predictable story to someone else. And age is a slight factor, but not that big of one, all depends on your intellect. You could have a 10 year old who writes a better story than a 16 year old. In writing there are no restrictions as to when you suddenly are much better, or when you aren't mentally restricted. And it still depends on audience and what type of person you are at writing.

I think it is a good story, despite it having a few mistakes.

It isn't really my type of story, yet it is still good.

RE: A story I wrote by Voldemort on 01-17-2006 at 01:20 AM

quote:
Originally posted by Tasha

See, not trying to start an arguement here, but that's sort of stupid... I mean, it all depends on what type of person you are, and who your audience is. What to you is predictable is probably not to others. What to you is an amazing novel of things you couldn't dream of, could be a completely boring and predictable story to someone else. And age is a slight factor, but not that big of one, all depends on your intellect. You could have a 10 year old who writes a better story than a 16 year old. In writing there are no restrictions as to when you suddenly are much better, or when you aren't mentally restricted. And it still depends on audience and what type of person you are at writing.

I think it is a good story, despite it having a few mistakes. (Smilie) It isn't really my type of story, yet it is still good. (Smilie)

Exactly.

RE: A story I wrote by prashker on 01-17-2006 at 02:27 AM

quote:
Originally posted by Tasha
I think it is a good story,

thanks

quote:
Originally posted by Tasha
despite it having a few mistakes.

I tried getting rid as many as possible. My teacher who is marking it will spot out the mistakes I missed

quote:
Originally posted by Tasha
It isn't really my type of story, yet it is still good.

thanks

RE: A story I wrote by John Anderton on 01-17-2006 at 10:39 AM

Good work

RE: A story I wrote by Lou on 01-17-2006 at 11:51 AM

Wow That's pretty good. and your Cover page is awesome. Keep it up!

RE: A story I wrote by prashker on 01-17-2006 at 12:44 PM

quote:
Originally posted by John Anderton
Good work

thanks

quote:
Originally posted by lou_habs
Wow That's pretty good.

thanks

quote:
Originally posted by lou_habs
and your Cover page is awesome.

I was amazed too

quote:
Originally posted by lou_habs
Keep it up!

I will try

RE: A story I wrote by ayjay on 01-17-2006 at 09:12 PM

How can a planet be inhabited by robots? They can't evolve or reproduce

Good story though.

RE: A story I wrote by prashker on 01-17-2006 at 09:14 PM

quote:
Originally posted by ajd
How can a planet be inhabited by robots? They can't evolve or reproduce

Its mister non-imagination

...j/k

I dunno :-#

* prashker runs

quote:
Originally posted by ajd
Good story though.

thanks

also

RE: A story I wrote by Voldemort on 01-17-2006 at 09:17 PM

quote:
Originally posted by SonicSam

(Smilie) Its mister non-imagination (Smilie)...j/k

I dunno (Smilie)

* SonicSam runs

Nanoparticles

RE: A story I wrote by stoshrocket on 01-17-2006 at 09:50 PM

quote:
Originally posted by Tasha
See, not trying to start an arguement here, but that's sort of stupid... I mean, it all depends on what type of person you are, and who your audience is. What to you is predictable is probably not to others. What to you is an amazing novel of things you couldn't dream of, could be a completely boring and predictable story to someone else. And age is a slight factor, but not that big of one, all depends on your intellect. You could have a 10 year old who writes a better story than a 16 year old. In writing there are no restrictions as to when you suddenly are much better, or when you aren't mentally restricted. And it still depends on audience and what type of person you are at writing.

I think it is a good story, despite it having a few mistakes. (Smilie) It isn't really my type of story, yet it is still good. (Smilie)

i know what you mean, and i dont want to get in an argument same as you so im not going to expand this any further than this: thats why i was putting it all in 'in my opinion..' 'in my experiences...' because thats what me and my friends found; that at 15 all of a sudden my imagination exploded and i started to write deeper and think more carfeully about underlying plot situations as well as my friends and a few other guys in my class (we ended up having a discussion thanks to this thread, lol) , but it does differ from everyone and i see your point tasha. :-#