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Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed! by Exca on 08-16-2007 at 12:35 PM

Hello

We are writing some lyrics in English and we are doubting..

Why Did You
Left Me Here
Alone
Why Didn’t You
Listen To Me

Can we use this or does it have to be "Have" and "Haven't"?

It's kind of a problem because it's already on Promo release. You can listen to the song here and read the complete lyrics: http://www.myspace.com/marlisamusic

Hoping for a fast answer.
Exca


RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed! by Eljay on 08-16-2007 at 12:38 PM

The "didn't" part is fine, although "why did you left me here" should be "why did you leave me here"...


RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed! by Nathan on 08-16-2007 at 01:03 PM

I really like the song that plays when I visit that myspace site :O

(y)


RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed! by Lou on 08-16-2007 at 01:22 PM

quote:
I Called Him Seven Days A Week (Days A Week)
But I Didn’t Had The Time To Speak (Time To Speak)
Should be
quote:
I Called Him Seven Days A Week (Days A Week)
But I Didn’t have The Time To Speak (Time To Speak)
.

quote:
All I Wanted Was His Love Just For Me
All I Wanted Was A Little Piece Of My Dreams
All I Wanted Was One Last Kiss
But The Words He Said To Me Where These
should be
quote:
All I Wanted Was His Love Just For Me
All I Wanted Was A Little Piece Of My Dreams
All I Wanted Was One Last Kiss
But The Words He Said To Me Were These

and finally,
quote:
Yeah,
I Want You To Know
I’m Fine Now
You Don’t Even Matter Too Me Anymore
should be
quote:
Yeah,
I Want You To Know
I’m Fine Now
You Don’t Even Matter To Me Anymore

The song is awesome by the way! I like it ;)

oh, I missed one:
quote:
BRIDGE

Why Did You
Left Me
Alone
Why Didn’t You
Listen To Me
Just Keep Sayin’
Go Away
I Wanne Give My Life A Chance To Grow
But He Doesn’t Understand The Words
I Love You
Go Away
I Wanne Give My Life A Chance To Grow
But He Doesn’t Understand The Words
I Love You
should probably be
quote:
BRIDGE

Why Did You
Left Me
Alone
Why Didn’t You
Listen To Me
Just Keep Sayin’
Go Away
I Wanne Give My Life A Chance To Grow
But He Doesn’t Understand The Words
I Love You
Go Away
I Wanna Give My Life A Chance To Grow
But He Doesn’t Understand The Words
I Love You

RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed! by Exca on 08-16-2007 at 01:34 PM

Tnx for helping us out!

The song indeed has a big 'scoring' potention, all credits to Enblanc and Marlies! :-). It's a refreshing style
Should be released soon.


RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed! by ddunk on 08-16-2007 at 10:41 PM

one last thing

quote:
I’m The One Who Fighted Day After Day (Day After Day)
should be "fought"

Great song, btw.
RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed! by lizard.boy on 08-16-2007 at 10:45 PM

quote:
Originally posted by Exca

The song indeed has a big 'scoring' potention[...]

I think you mean potential. ;)
I also think you're right, it's a pretty darn good song.
RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed! by Exca on 10-19-2007 at 06:27 PM

The song is updated with the new vocals. This took some time as the studio is not like a supermarket you just walk in to and do your thing ;). We combined this with 2 new songs. One is ready and the other one is to be continued in the third studio-session which comes soon hopefully.

Check it out on www.myspace.com/marlisamusic

Thanks again for your help :)


RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed! by Lou on 10-19-2007 at 10:52 PM

Is it still the go away original one? Also, can you provide a downloadable one? I'd love to have this on my MP3 ;)


RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed! by Chris4 on 10-19-2007 at 11:01 PM

Great song. Pity you disabled the download link! :(
Good luck! :grin:


RE: Didn't/Haven't... Spelling Help Needed! by Nathan on 10-24-2007 at 03:37 PM

quote:
Originally posted by Exca
The song is updated with the new vocals. This took some time as the studio is not like a supermarket you just walk in to and do your thing ;). We combined this with 2 new songs. One is ready and the other one is to be continued in the third studio-session which comes soon hopefully.

Check it out on www.myspace.com/marlisamusic

Thanks again for your help :)
I really like the first one but the second one isnt as good imho but thats just my opinion lol