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Originally posted by Tochjo
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Originally posted by CookieRevised
(but do state what you think then of the 'shorter' one, just the subject "contactpersoon" is removed there.)
It seems you don't want me to shut up yet 
The shorter one seems like a bad 'thing in the middle'. On a scale from 1 to 10, I'd give the longest one a 10, and the shortest one a 9. The thing in between doesn't look very nice to me, because, personally, I see it as an unfinished sentence. When I read that kind of sentences, I always have some sort of 'sentence only half finished' feeling.
The shortest one looks better to me; it gives just to the point information, not a half finished sentence. Just as you already said, it's very personal.
agreed with you. first is long, 2nd is worse, last is good.
edit: I should read more careful and be less a sleep when I post. sorry. I voted wrong, and posted wrong
I agree with tochjo.
