ehr... find it a tad bit too abstract... i've no clue of what it's supposed to be
doesn't make me feel anything. without the text, could be something some company would use as logo...
the text is also a bit too... fast. i would've put more space between the lines. the most important two, about "you are missing me", directly follow up... just imagine it being said in a movie, dude, there'd at least be ten seconds between the two sentences... you don't even have a . to end the first one
at least do that, but it'd be better if you'd put more space between the two. hit enter at least three times.
also, i find the entire composition just too energetic for such a... well, kinda serious statement. when spoken (/written) the right way, it's quite dramatic, even. the pic has just got too much speed for such a time-taking statement...
i'm not hating it though...
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