ehr... find it a tad bit too abstract... i've no clue of what it's supposed to be
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doesn't make me feel anything. without the text, could be something some company would use as logo...
the text is also a bit too... fast. i would've put more space between the lines. the most important two, about "you are missing me", directly follow up... just imagine it being said in a movie, dude, there'd at least be ten seconds between the two sentences... you don't even have a . to end the first one
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at least do that, but it'd be better if you'd put more space between the two. hit enter at least three times.
also, i find the entire composition just too energetic for such a... well, kinda serious statement. when spoken (/written) the right way, it's quite dramatic, even. the pic has just got too much speed for such a time-taking statement...
i'm not hating it though...