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RE: Short story help

I couldnt end that story, It doesnt really have a story line or really make sence. One minute hes playing baseball the next minute hes smashing 6 year olds head open?

¬¬ Nu uh. The descriptions are good but the actual story isnt.

This post was edited on 02-21-2006 at 02:16 PM by LittleK.

02-21-2006 02:16 PM

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Short story help - by Joe on 02-17-2006 at 02:43 PM

RE: Short story help - by qgroessl on 02-17-2006 at 02:48 PM

RE: Short story help - by *Saint* on 02-17-2006 at 02:53 PM

RE: Short story help - by qgroessl on 02-17-2006 at 02:54 PM

RE: Short story help - by Joe on 02-17-2006 at 02:55 PM

RE: Short story help - by qgroessl on 02-17-2006 at 02:59 PM

RE: Short story help - by linx05 on 02-18-2006 at 09:21 AM

RE: Short story help - by zach on 02-18-2006 at 12:11 PM

RE: Short story help - by LittleK on 02-21-2006 at 02:16 PM

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