| RE: absolute Adjectives shifted out of order amplify the details of the image. 
 Adjective out of order painted by Newton Peck in A Day No Pigs Would Die:
 
 I could smell Mama, crisp and starched, plumping my pillow, and the cool muslin pillowcase touched both my ears as the back of my head sank into all those feathers.
 
 
 best/only real example i can find.
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