No, it is not good. If that person doesn't like your translation, then it is obviously because there are many things wrong with it, that exactly means that, . Moreover, CookieRevised and me too don't like it
without knowing Croatian (well, I'm not sure if Cookie knows it
) Please bother to read Translation Guidelines once and in case you already read it, re-read and try to understand it now because it looks like you haven't understood how translation works yet.